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Title: Little Boy Blue
Rating: PG13
Genre: Gen, Weechesters
Characters/ Pairings: Sam Winchester, Dean Winchester, OC
Word Count: 1090
Warnings: Some course language and violence - adult themes.
Disclaimer: Characters belong to the creator and the network. No profit is being made - just doing this for fun.
Summary: Someone nasty has their eye on six year old Sammy. It's up to eleven year old Dean to save the day and possibly his baby brother's life.
Author’s Notes: Written for a Triple Play prompt on [livejournal.com profile] ohsam. 1. Store or mall 2. Dean and kidnapper 3. Wee!Sam gets lost in the store and almost gets kidnapped. Dean kicks some ass. I veered from the prompt just slightly as Sammy didn't get lost.



He sees him by the comic books in his too big hand-me-down shirt and jeans, his small hand reverently stroking the covers. This is his new favorite hunting ground – the racks of comics are close to the store entrance which is right beside the fire exit. So many little ones left alone whilst their parents peruse the book offerings further inside the store. It's always so easy to take them, it’s almost like they are being offered up so why shouldn’t he take them.

He’s already done this twice before – never in the same state, after all he’s not stupid. It’s been months since his last little toy broke and had to be discarded and he’d been such fun to play with, just like this one will be – he’s perfect. He looks to be around six or seven years old with soft wavy brown hair, big dimples and expressive puppy dog eyes. He can’t wait to see those eyes tear-filled, to see the fear in them. Little boy blue. He suppresses a shiver.

He can see how much the boy wants one of those comics, maybe he could lure him away with the promise of one. Much less chance of attracting attention that way, there’s always a risk that he might be seen if he drags him out. He knows this one was meant to be because he didn’t come in with an adult just an older child – brother maybe – no more than twelve and completely absorbed with the car magazines further over. This will be a piece of cake.

He can’t wait any longer – can’t lose this golden opportunity whilst the older boy is distracted. He stands next to the boy and picks up a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle comic, one of the ones the boy has been eyeing. He’s about to speak to the child, ask for help in choosing something for his son but the boy is instantly wary and starts to look around for the other one. He knows if he speaks the boy will leave or call out, he’ll have to snatch him now. He quickly scans around and seeing nobody close by he grabs the boy’s arm and clasps his hand to his mouth, lifting him easily and moving quickly through the entrance to the door of the fire exit. “De..” The rest is muffled quickly by his large hand.

Dean is three racks over but instantly hears Sam’s small cry, even over the cheesy music playing through the store’s PA system. He rushes to where his brother had been but the space is empty. He whirls around and thinks he sees his brother’s small feet disappearing through the fire exit just outside the store and takes off at a run. He pushes through the doors screaming, “Sammy!” and sees a man pushing his little brother into a car parked just outside.

He yells, “Hey!” and the man turns toward him with a feral look on his face.

He’s annoyed that the older boy found him so quickly but it won’t make any difference. He’ll be in the car and gone by the time the older child can run for help. He grins at him as he pushes his prize over the bench seat to the passenger side. He knows his toy can’t escape because he removed the door handle. But instead of screaming, or running to find an adult the boy reaches behind himself and pulls a small snub nosed pistol from his waistband. What the hell?

“Move away from the car you sick fuck or I’ll blow a hole clear through your head.” The boy has a steady aim, not even a small tremor in his outstretched arms.

He weighs up his options – would the boy actually do it? He’s just a child himself. He could most likely throw himself into the car and be gone by the time the boy can react but then the boy calmly flips off the safety.

“I won’t say it again, move!”

He raises in arms in front of himself in a gesture of surrender and steps away from the car door.

“All the way to the back.”

He complies, walking backward toward the car trunk.

“Sammy, get out of the car.”

The small one, his beloved prize, leaps from the car and runs to the older child who pushes him behind to shield him.

“Are you alright?”

The little boy is crying, snot and tears running down his face, exactly the way he had pictured he would look when he got him to his play room – beautifully terrified. But now he would never get to play with this toy.

“M’okay,” the small boy snuffles and hiccups, pressing into his brother’s back.

“Do you think you can run when I tell you?”

“Uh huh.”

Before he gets a chance to think about the boys calling for help or the police the older boy speaks again.

“Throw me the car keys.” His stance hasn’t wavered, his face a mask of cold fury that looks odd on a child. There is zero fear. He tosses the keys and the boy moves forward enough to pull them toward himself with his foot.

“Get the keys, Sammy.” The small boy picks up the keys with one hand while the other arm is wiping his face.

“Get ready to run,” Dean whispers.

“You one of those sick fucks that get off on hurting little kids?”

The question is obviously rhetorical because the boy doesn’t seem to be expecting an answer and he doesn’t offer one. He is really regretting everything now, not only choosing this particular boy but parking where no other soul is likely to walk by.

The older boy moves toward him but not getting close enough to be grabbed or tackled.

“You were gonna hurt my baby brother.”

Before he can begin to talk or plead he feels the bullet shatter his knee at the same moment he hears the explosion of the gun being fired. White hot fire burns its way through his body and he is vaguely aware of the older boy shouting “Run, Sammy!”

His vision dims to black spots as he thinks about the incriminating souvenirs in his car that he kept from his two previous toys and wishes he had kept them somewhere safe as he hears running footsteps approaching and a voice telling him to hold on, an ambulance and police are on their way. He wants to run, needs to escape but as he hears the distant sirens, the darkness claims him.

Fin

Date: 2013-09-02 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] killabeez.livejournal.com
Oh, man, that is AWESOME. Your art had my heart in my throat all by itself, but then reading this from the predator's POV was even more horrifying.

The way you show Dean and Sam reacting is perfect. ♥

Date: 2013-09-02 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much!! I probably should've warned that it was a creepy fic. I've never done the POV of a predator before and I have no idea where that came from lol! I'm one sick puppy!

I'm really glad you liked it.

Date: 2013-09-02 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennytork.livejournal.com
That was eerily perfect.

The predator POV was perfect for this, and you described the sickness of the obsession perfectly. And the boys' soldier-trained reactions, honed with Dean's motherly radar -- this was just amazing!

Thank you!

Date: 2013-09-02 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Whee! I'm thrilled that it worked. What does it say about my brain that I described a predator's thoughts so well? eep!
Thanks so much!

Date: 2013-09-02 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsy-atavari.livejournal.com
Wow, so well done. The characterizations seemed authentic on many levels. I love Dean's finely honed instincts about Sammy. And if you set out to achieve a creepy vibe, you did it! That guy better be glad that he would likely be going to jail soon because John would've probably given something more than shattered kneecaps once he hunted him down. Hehehe.

Date: 2013-09-02 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thank you! I pulled off creepy, I'm happy!
My brain was racing ahead to what happens next but if I'd have kept going it would've been too long.

Date: 2013-09-02 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenshih-blue.livejournal.com
Found this one whilst stumbling about this morning and I have to say...BRAVO! Very well written and I can definitely see Dean doing exactly that. We already know Dean was hunting at this age so it makes perfect sense he would carry a weapon.

Having the story told through the predator's eyes gives us an opportunity to see the brother's--in particular Dean--through the perceptions of a human monster. He sees them as nothing but victims to be plucked as fruit for his twisted tastes. After all their only children, right? Well, the Winchesters were never just children.

His shock at having Dean not only give chase, but pull a gun is his downfall.The fact Dean doesn't kill him outright gives us a sense Dean understands what will happen when the police arrive.Not to mention what police officer will believe the truth of what happened even if the predator told them.

This might be a short, but it packs a powerful, gut-wrenching, emotional punch. Thank you for sharing it. =D

Date: 2013-09-02 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Oh wow, thanks so much for such a thoughtful comment! I did think a lot about the weapons and we do know from canon that Dean was taught to handle guns from an extremely young age. It just seemed to me that John would've made sure Dean was armed whenever the boys were alone and not at school. I picked a really small handgun for two reasons - the ability to hide it easily on a small body and the photo I did the manip with had that weapon. It was originally another boy and I manipulated young Dean's face to fit as the only gun he was pictured with in the show was a shotgun. So I guess the art helped drive the story.

I didn't want to have him kill a human at such a young age - way too traumatic. The police involvement was why the boys ran.

Super glad it worked for you.

Date: 2013-09-02 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com
Wow, that was creepily terrifying and having it from the predator's point of view was the perfect way to go. Both boys were perfectly characterized. Very nice, thanks for sharing!

Date: 2013-09-02 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's really good to know that the characterizations worked :)

Date: 2013-09-02 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chellexxx.livejournal.com
excellent view point of a monster of the human variety. Dean was fantastic, not that i would expect any less. Thoroughly gripped from the first to the last word

thanks for sharing
xxx

Date: 2013-09-03 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks! Sometimes the worst monsters are human. Glad you liked it!

Date: 2013-09-02 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lalablue.livejournal.com
I can totally see this scene with wee-chesters! Dean has no fear when it comes to his Sammy. Short but completely effective.

Date: 2013-09-03 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks! I think Dean was probably terrified on the inside but way too protective of Sammy to let it show. The challenge was for 300 words and I got carried away!

Date: 2013-09-02 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] septembers-coda.livejournal.com
It's a testament to how good this fic is that I read the whole thing-- I can't deal with the child-predator thing, but this pulled me in immediately. And wow. Scary. I had to stick around to see Dean kick ass, and it was extra-awesome that we know the predator was also going to jail (minus one kneecap). GO DEAN. Very well done!

Date: 2013-09-03 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Huge compliment, thank you! The subject creeps me out something fierce so I surprised myself by getting into the predator's head like that. Made me want to scrub my brain clean afterward LOL! I'm glad you stuck with it to see Dean save the day.

Date: 2013-09-02 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strgazr04.livejournal.com
Amazing! And so creepy! Ugh that guy was a dick lol. I love how Dean was just perfectly calm though inside he was probably freaking out. Well done.

Thank you so much for filling my prompt!!!

Date: 2013-09-03 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thank YOU for such a delicious prompt! As soon as I read it the story started writing itself. Glad you're happy with the result :)

Date: 2013-09-02 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joajohns17.livejournal.com
I loved this story. So well written. I like the fact that you did it from the pervs point of view. Really creepy and just so perfect.
I can totally picture something like this happening and Dean being able to handle it that way.
Great Job.

Date: 2013-09-03 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thank you! When I read the prompt the pervert just popped into my head and whispered to me. I had to have Dean shoot him to get him out LOL.

Date: 2013-09-03 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joajohns17.livejournal.com
PS I love the header to your page :D

Date: 2013-09-03 09:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks hon! I just love that photo so I couldn't resist using it in my banner.

Date: 2013-09-03 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Happy! Thank you!

Edition 2,659

Date: 2013-09-03 09:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] enablelove referenced to your post from Edition 2,659 (http://spnnewsletter.livejournal.com/739142.html) saying: [...] by (PG-13) Little Boy Blue [...]

Date: 2013-09-03 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-naan.livejournal.com
Oh, WOW! The POV was wonderfully done - it felt so, so scarily realistic - and the way you had the boys behave was spot-on. You wrote young Dean's reaction so well I could picture it! So, so good!

Date: 2013-09-03 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks you so much! I enjoyed writing from the outside POV even if I did creep myself out.

Date: 2013-09-05 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ash48.livejournal.com
Oh man. That could well be the creepiest thing I've read. What a horrid monster of a man. I was actually quite scared for Sam even though I knew dean would be awesome. I have a bit of a thing for kidnapping fics so THANK YOU for writing one.

Date: 2013-09-06 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
What a great compliment, thank you so much! Good to know that the creepiness was effective.

Thanks for the lovely comment.

Date: 2013-09-05 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 2blueshoes.livejournal.com
Yay! Love me some BAMF Dean, and a wee one even better

Date: 2013-09-06 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
He was mighty BAMF in this but he always is isn't he ;)

Thanks for the comment.

PS: Love your icon!

Date: 2013-09-07 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mentholpixie.livejournal.com
This is great! Totally dark and creepy and you did a great job writing from the kidnappers POV. It gave me shivers!

And the art is fantastic! Great work hun!

Date: 2013-09-08 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks Livvie! So glad you liked it!

Date: 2013-09-08 09:17 am (UTC)
stormcloude: peace (sn boys laughing)
From: [personal profile] stormcloude
I love outsider POV on the Winchesters and I especially love how young Dean is such a badass. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2013-09-08 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks a bunch! It was an interesting exercise to write an outsider POV, especially one so twisted.

Date: 2013-09-26 12:26 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-09-26 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2013-09-27 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sylvia-locust.livejournal.com
Oooh, very creepy and I love bad-ass Dean!

Date: 2013-09-27 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thanks! Wee!dean is just as bad-ass as adult Dean when it comes to his Sammy!

Date: 2013-11-30 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zara-zee.livejournal.com
Really enjoyed this. Love to see baby Winchesters kickin' ass! :)

Date: 2013-11-30 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it! there was definitely some ass kicking being done. Little Dean was BAMF!

Date: 2013-12-17 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tx-devilorangel.livejournal.com
This awesome. Dean would totally cap someone who tried to hurt this baby brother.

Date: 2013-12-17 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yep mini!Dean is BAMF :)

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Date: 2016-06-22 11:05 am (UTC)
ext_101858: (Cute wittle bebby...)
From: [identity profile] leak666.livejournal.com
I have read this multiple times and it's still as good as i remember. I'm glad you were around to point me back to it. :)

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Date: 2016-06-22 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggie11.livejournal.com
Me too! I haven't been around much lately.

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